Evil Avalon
Evil Avalon
By Narusawa Akito
Completed
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309 Chapters
4.05
19 Reviews
It was a short moment of happiness to find that I was transferred to world of a game that I had been playing for many years. I had been transferred to Sota Narumi, a villain character who is fat enough to be mistaken for a pig.  Even though it is a game world where you can enjoy romance in a school full of beautiful men and women, he is called “Butao” and his school life is filled with comtempt from his classmates. If I proceed according to the story as it is progresses, I will be abandoned by my fiancée and childhood friend, and in the end I will be forced to drop out. I will never give up even in such a dire situation! Eventually I will build a harem and become a top adventurer!  This is the story of a man who will become unrivalled in both love and dungeons.
CH 41.1
Usually these "RPG high school" novels focus mostly on
powers > harem >>>> everything else
The divergence from the norm here is the amount of world building committed. A lot of situations are fleshed out and it feels like this could of been a real video game. However due to this those few inconstancies stand out even more (What even is Class-E). Worth your time and I hope it continues to evolve into something great.
9
0
2023-07-17
CH 39.2
So far it is more focused on Dungeon raids and level ups for MC and I didn't see on Harem and romance based on tags because its in the early part of the story was that heroines was neglected I hope for the upcoming more updates it is must be justified and build up more romance relationship despite that his attitude was more on self improvement and maturistic attidude.
Spoiler
[MC using common sense knowledge like hiding and monopolizing the game knowledge and that he was a transmigator and has many game knowledge because he would likely hunted by the same transmigators and government and clans so he want to avoid conflict as much as possible and he was avoiding MainChara and its harem and ignoring them well which is rational because he wants to avoid problems as much as possible. He trusted no one aside from his in game (Character) family. Well for me I want to see more romance development because he was too much immeresed on Leveling thats all. Almost 80 percent of the story about leveling and dungeon raids so far]
8
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2023-07-17
CH 71
This is pretty wack. The MC has a s*upid mentality and doesn't do anything when the higher class people does something to them. A LOT of useless information, so I skipped around here and there quite a bit cuz it won't matter if I do. Might get better later but right now kinda dog tbh. Also translation lil wack, the pronouns for a character switches out of nowhere, they could be using "he"to describe the MC and the line right after they'll be using she and stuff. So when a new character pops up you'll be confused bout their gender til like the end of the chapter. And some people say that he's playing it safe, which is a good idea but, there's a limit to how safe he has to play. Homie be bringing 5 handguns, 10 dynamites, and a f*cking holy sword just to beat an ant, that's size of a pea. Him doing that "safe play" just really irks me, so I probably be putting this on hold until further notice.
8
0
2023-07-17
CH 20
Nothing special. Same as those harem stories
but if you're a scavenger of this type of stories, this will be a palace to dig for. I am, that's why I'm enjoying it. The author slacked at the world-building part by introducing jp layout otherworld. But he wrote the story with care. Plot iS engaging. Usually, I don't read the grind part cz it's just plagiarizing. But this novel's grinding is honestly intriguing. If you enjoy typical harem novels like me, you shouldn't miss it. It's way above its peer stories.
NU page is inconsistent on uploading the weekly updates. So I recommend following tler's discord for regular updates (yes translator is updating maintaining weekly schedule)
6
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2023-07-17
CH 20
Nothing special. Same as those harem stories
but if you're a scavenger of this type of stories, this will be a palace to dig for. I am, that's why I'm enjoying it. The author slacked at the world-building part by introducing jp layout otherworld. But he wrote the story with care. Plot iS engaging. Usually, I don't read the grind part cz it's just plagiarizing. But this novel's grinding is honestly intriguing. If you enjoy typical harem novels like me, you shouldn't miss it. It's way above its peer stories.
NU page is inconsistent on uploading the weekly updates. So I recommend following tler's discord for regular updates (yes translator is updating maintaining weekly schedule)
6
0
2023-08-07
CH 35
Pretty good so far.
There's a TON of world building, the MC is cool headed and doesn't really care about the mean comments from others, he just does his thing.
I just hope the childhood friend dies or something, such a unlikable person she is, MC don't really get involved with people from school, but he helps his little sister and later the rest of his family to level up, something really new and refreshing in a game world isekai, ' class mates don't like me because I'm fat and weak? Who cares? I'll power level my family and make them my party! 'I'll be disappointed if he doesn't tell the 'FL' to f*ck off!
Translation is pretty good, but it could really use a proof reader or something, there's a LOT of double sentences that could be taken off if someone took a look before posting, but besides that, it's pretty good.
4
0
2023-07-17
CH 62.1
Good character development, world-building, and an overall fun plot. Some reviews said the MC is a Beta male. Personal opinion, I think he's playing things smart. It's a world where nobles can kill you (well, they'd hire someone TO kill you) without repercussions. So laying low is a good idea.
Fleshed out relationships with other students are just starting to happen. Still nothing to see related to the "Romance" Tag, but character development/progress SHOULD take time.
There's a few things that don't make sense, like why does their school matter? If they go to a normal school without Nobles they wouldn't be harassed, AND they can still go into the dungeon!
Overall, it's worth reading.
3
0
2023-07-17
CH 44.1
this is a good novel to read for time pass
pls note that in novel updates, its not updated
translater website has about sixty chapters
the novel is interesting that I started reading this instead of reading for test
(PS: I hadn't done my test well)
so far dungeon diving and levelling up is fcused rather than harem and romance
but still nice read
pov from other persons are super
3
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2023-07-17
CH 45.1
The novel translation is readable if you don't mind the pronouns getting mixed up a few times.
The world set up is good and easy to understand. And there's also detailed descriptions of things as to why this is this and that is that. There's also pov of people other than MC sometimes (which I like very much in a novel). And the povs are done really well.
As for the story you can pretty much guess from the description. But is of better quality. The progress speed is slow and steady. If you like this kind of work then I don't think you will regret reading it.
Spoiler
At first the MC is hated and ridiculed for being defeated by a slime (which is not true but just a rumour). His childhood sweetheart dislikes him and leans toward the in game protagonist. She also believes the rumours and makes fun of him. I don't know the details of what the MC did before he got his memories back but still the childhood friend is not likeable. She even tries to isolate him from his few classmates who stand by his side. Truthfully I don't want the childhood friend route. The MC is currently using his game knowledge to improve himself to protect himself and his family. The grinding and other skill related things are fun to read. And they are not so cliche. But the story just starts here and there are many twist and turns.
The novel is supposed to be weekly released (but thanks to the sponsorship of a few readers the sponsored chaps are daily released from that you can guess how much it is loved) and the NU page doesn't respond as there are already 60+ chapters but it shows only till chapter 5. So, for more updates join their discord or go to their homepage (or about us page or whatever it is), there in the midst of other gems you may find this diamond.
3
0
2023-07-17
CH 6
Read a lot of light novels and may not be an expert but so far this is a very good read. I personally like the whole redemption of character story plot and also enjoy a story plot where the character not only works from ground zero but behind. It’s cool to see how someone can turn their life around and struggle with their past reputation. I hope this novel gets traction and some support.
So far the character development of the MC is good and looking forward to learning about the other characters but this is only the beginning. Waiting for the next ch!
3
0
2023-07-17


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